Creating stories with animals as your characters is great fun. By using imaginative words, you can paint a picture of each animal in your reader’s mind, and all without a paint brush.
Let’s see how you can do this. Meet Ziggy, a Pekinese. (That’s a dog, for those of you who don’t know!)
Ziggy was no bigger than a guinea pig and had a face like a squashed monkey’s. No-one actually could be sure that he was a dog. When he breathed, he made snorting noises like a piglet.
Now you’ve started building a picture of Ziggy. But what else can you do? How do we get a feel for his personality?
‘Back off,’ Ziggy snapped, his tiny razor-sharp teeth showing between black lips. He eyed the huge bone in front of him. It was nearly twice his size. But Ziggy showed no speck of fear. He stood his ground, not a quiver in his body, as Bob the basset looked on.
Okay, now we get an idea of who Ziggy is and how he appears to others. But what about how Ziggy feels inside?
Ziggy’s heart thundered in his chest. That basset was way bigger than him. He’d gobble him up in one quick bite. Please, he thought to himself, please let me look scary.
Now you’re getting an idea of how dialogue and action around dialogue can paint a picture of your character.
In my workshop, ‘Doggy Dialogue’, you’ll get the chance to bring to life the doggy characters in my book ‘Seeing Dogs’. And of course, Lucy, my guide dog, will be there to lend a paw.
See you there!
Janet
Hi! My name’s Lucy and I’m a guide dog.
I’m happy to talk about the life of a famous writer (although first I’ll need to find one so I can ask them what it’s like …), how to write a bestselling book (this topic might be cut, as JK Rowling hasn’t replied to my emails, faxes, SMSs, phone calls and letters yet), and what a million dollars in cash looks like (might also be cut, as the bank hasn’t got back to me either – I only need it for a day, but they’re being really difficult).
Here are a 3 questions for you to research:
At boarding school I remember receiving a letter in which she described the antics of a skink who lived under the fridge. He would retrieve sultanas she threw to him and hoard them in a little pile.
If you haven’t read The Little Prince, you really must. It’s a wonderful little book – written a long time ago and now people describe it as a ‘classic’. This just means it’s one of the all time best books ever written.
There is another reason why I love coming to Rosalie Primary School.
I’m looking forward to coming to this year’s Rosalie Writers Festival to talk about my new book, Simpson and his Donkey.
